nice
I really agree with this: "The overall impression is a little more plodding/synthy rather than dreamy and mournful. The quantization is really not helping you there. Try playing in your flute part live, or at the least using some humanization scripts on it top make it sing a little more. It sounds very stiff right now."
and another guy who said the drums come in too late. I really like the scene you set for this one, it added a lot to the song. Other than that it sounded pretty good, I can tell you put a lot of time into this