I really agree with this: "The overall impression is a little more plodding/synthy rather than dreamy and mournful. The quantization is really not helping you there. Try playing in your flute part live, or at the least using some humanization scripts on it top make it sing a little more. It sounds very stiff right now."
and another guy who said the drums come in too late. I really like the scene you set for this one, it added a lot to the song. Other than that it sounded pretty good, I can tell you put a lot of time into this
thank you. like i said with the quantization, i did the part improvised so im not sure how to make it less like that. i did just get a whole bunch new instruments so i might go through and see if it makes it any better
Not much to say
I thought this was really cool
really rockin, nice solo
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